View Full Version : belyro waxes poetic....
belyro
08-31-2007, 07:24 AM
For the life of me I can't make the indents work right on here :confused:, so imagine that the 4th, 6th, and 8th lines are indented.
Healing light
Bringing pain, destroying me.
Killing what I want
To save what I need
Giving me darkness
To keep me from blindness
I love and hate you
Murderous savior
Burn me and let me see
Scar me to protect me
Heal me
Heal me
princesslinda
08-31-2007, 07:26 AM
Thanks for sharing Bethany...you should "wax" more often.
:congrats: :congrats:
belyro
08-31-2007, 07:31 AM
Thanks for sharing Bethany...you should "wax" more often.
:congrats: :congrats:
I don't like to "overwax" or wear out my "wax welcome". :o
xMenace
08-31-2007, 08:04 AM
I don't like to "overwax" or wear out my "wax welcome". :o
It is a slippery slope ...
belyro
08-31-2007, 08:06 AM
It is a slippery slope ...
LOL - oh xMenace, you witty guy.....
shockme
08-31-2007, 08:53 AM
cool-bethany! set it to some thrash metal and you've got a hit...:T but seriously-it is cool! trish
belyro
08-31-2007, 08:56 AM
cool-bethany! set it to some thrash metal and you've got a hit...:T but seriously-it is cool! trish
My brother's in a metal band (a very good one, I might add). Maybe I'll give this to him for lyrics. :T
Injecto
08-31-2007, 10:09 AM
Beautiful Poem...in a sick kind of way.
xMenace
08-31-2007, 10:44 AM
cool-bethany! set it to some thrash metal and you've got a hit...:T but seriously-it is cool! trish
I was thinking country with he sad overtones and ironic lyrics, but metal prolly works better.
belyro
08-31-2007, 11:02 AM
Beautiful Poem...in a sick kind of way.
Um...Thank you?
peej07
09-04-2007, 12:05 PM
Neat and twisted...I love it!
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